A revision of humiliation,
And moments of sheer pain
Will help my cause
My friends explain
Works like an antibiotic in a way
Whatever causes harm
Can also cure, they say.
But antibiotics have side effects
They remove the obvious defects
And leave you with less obvious ones,
Dry throat, spinning head
All you see is darkness ahead..
nice one neha
ReplyDeletepoetry mix with medicines
keep writing
rmsh
hmmm.....kuchh khatru hi likha hai :D
ReplyDelete@ Ramesh.. Thank you..
ReplyDelete@ Pawan.. :D :D
nice one neha
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ReplyDeleteIf we swap antibiotics with weed ...the effects will be same or somewhat light instead of dark :) :)
ReplyDeletenyc mix anyways pls continue writing :)
Good one! Its an irony that what causes harm can also cure!
ReplyDeleteMaybe they are the two sides of the same coin, who knows!
A suggestion: change the background color, its not very friendly to eyes.
ReplyDeleteImagination can paint life in not so happy things...Lovely work!
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