Monday, July 4, 2011


A revision of humiliation,
And moments of sheer pain
Will help my cause
My friends explain
Works like an antibiotic in a way
Whatever causes harm
Can also cure, they say.
But antibiotics have side effects
They remove the obvious defects
And leave you with less obvious ones,
Dry throat, spinning head
All you see is darkness ahead..

9 comments:

  1. nice one neha
    poetry mix with medicines

    keep writing
    rmsh

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  2. hmmm.....kuchh khatru hi likha hai :D

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  3. @ Ramesh.. Thank you..
    @ Pawan.. :D :D

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  5. If we swap antibiotics with weed ...the effects will be same or somewhat light instead of dark :) :)

    nyc mix anyways pls continue writing :)

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  6. Good one! Its an irony that what causes harm can also cure!
    Maybe they are the two sides of the same coin, who knows!

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  7. A suggestion: change the background color, its not very friendly to eyes.

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  8. Imagination can paint life in not so happy things...Lovely work!

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