Sunday, April 1, 2012

baring it all


You asked no questions
Nothing I could’ve told you,
Only the tears flowed,
Washing away all the rue
Heavenly surrender I felt,
As I cried in front of you

Your soothing fingers
Caressed my hair
Your knees,
A comfort to the swollen eyes.
Those sobs still resonate,
A sound never dies
I found a release, oh so new
Stripping all defenses,
I cried in front of you.

Doubts melted away,
Murky waters turned blue
That divine theory,
About you being me,
And me being you
It all turned true,
As I cried in front of you.

24 comments:

  1. you being me and me being you..
    - beautiful:)

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  2. OH DEAR...that selflessness with which you surrendered yourself with trust and willingness is the best ....like i said your thought process is simply commendable....keep on writing m all hooked up :)

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  3. Wow! wow Neha WOW! I think this is one of your best piece ever! :) That utter feeling of giving up yourself to someone you love sooo much! Real beautiful!! <3 so in love with the title too .. :)

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    1. Thanks Jen.. So glad that you liked it..

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  4. Beautiful, Beautiful and Beautiful! Loved the connections of feelings and thoughts Neha. One of your best-est! :D

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    1. Thanks for the appreciation, Rachit.. =)

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  5. CLueless when it comes to romance :(

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    1. Don't worry about it.. You are not missing out on much.. :)

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  6. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  7. "You being me and me being you" - Just awesome! Fell in love with it :)
    You seem to be touching new heights with each post!
    Keep it coming!:)

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  8. Another beautiful emotional piece. Last Para is very beautiful indeed!!

    P.S - I have linked your Poem Koshish on my latest hindi Post. Hope you won't mind. :-)

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    1. Thanks for linking my poem, Kunal. Its a huge compliment :)

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  9. It is indeed a comforting feeling when you can truly *cry* in front of someone :-)

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