You asked no questions
Nothing I could’ve told you,
Only the tears flowed,
Washing away all the rue
Heavenly surrender I felt,
As I cried in front of you
Your soothing fingers
Caressed my hair
Your knees,
A comfort to the swollen eyes.
Those sobs still resonate,
A sound never dies
I found a release, oh so new
Stripping all defenses,
I cried in front of you.
Doubts melted away,
Murky waters turned blue
That divine theory,
About you being me,
And me being you
It all turned true,
As I cried in front of you.
you being me and me being you..
ReplyDelete- beautiful:)
OH DEAR...that selflessness with which you surrendered yourself with trust and willingness is the best ....like i said your thought process is simply commendable....keep on writing m all hooked up :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for this lovely comment :)
DeleteWow! wow Neha WOW! I think this is one of your best piece ever! :) That utter feeling of giving up yourself to someone you love sooo much! Real beautiful!! <3 so in love with the title too .. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jen.. So glad that you liked it..
DeleteBeautiful, Beautiful and Beautiful! Loved the connections of feelings and thoughts Neha. One of your best-est! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for the appreciation, Rachit.. =)
DeleteCLueless when it comes to romance :(
ReplyDeleteDon't worry about it.. You are not missing out on much.. :)
Deletelovely words...nicely crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteLove the last para. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rià :)
DeleteGreat composition !
ReplyDeleteThanks Vivek :)
Delete"You being me and me being you" - Just awesome! Fell in love with it :)
ReplyDeleteYou seem to be touching new heights with each post!
Keep it coming!:)
Thanks for saying such things :)
DeleteAnother beautiful emotional piece. Last Para is very beautiful indeed!!
ReplyDeleteP.S - I have linked your Poem Koshish on my latest hindi Post. Hope you won't mind. :-)
Thanks for linking my poem, Kunal. Its a huge compliment :)
DeleteBeautiful piece :)
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a comforting feeling when you can truly *cry* in front of someone :-)
ReplyDeleteIsn't it.. :)
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