I saw love and laughter,
And love some more..
People around told me,
I was staring at a closed door..
The smell was intoxicating,
The music made my heart soar.
Little did I realize,
I was staring at a closed door..
I could have run, I could have flown
I could have swum and reached the shore.
Instead I kept sitting,
Staring at the closed door..
Very nicely written Neha and much profound I should say. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words Rachit.. :)
DeleteOh, this is so beautiful. You weaved simple words in such a lovely way. Though, it's sad but expression is superb, Neha!
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru, for such an encouraging comment.. :)
DeleteI love the flow of words. It was indeed very nice :)
ReplyDeleteThank you.. :)
Deletethe theme is always abstract! its like there is so much hidden in each note! i just love reading you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this awesome comment, Sawan. :)
DeleteA closed door that's open to many interpretations. Well done :)
ReplyDeletekeep it goin;)
Thanks a lot Amit.. :)
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