Wednesday, January 25, 2012

I see you walk away..















Don't leave....
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If you must,
Then don't leave me
Hanging from the cliff
Just one push and be done.

Don't leave me
With throbbing pain and numbness
Taking their turns.
Tear me apart, rip my heart..
Let me bleed to death..


Awesome Sketch By : Himanshi Baid :)
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10 comments:

  1. Jen..The Butterfly EffectJanuary 25, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Aww.Please don't be sad! Be happy!:)

    Beautiful words though!

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    1. Neha ShandilyaJanuary 25, 2012 at 11:58 AM

      Hey, thanks.. :)
      And it's just the poem which is sad, not me.. :)

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  2. AkankshaJanuary 25, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    Sad, but beautiful.Sometimes, an end can be a whole new beginning as well.
    Hope you're okay.

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    1. Neha ShandilyaJanuary 25, 2012 at 4:34 PM

      It's hope that keeps us all alive.. :)
      And yeah, I'm okay, very much.. :)

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  3. RachitJanuary 30, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    Such a deep display of emotions! It's sad and screeching in pain. Beautifully worded Neha.

    Keep Writing. :)

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    1. Neha ShandilyaJanuary 31, 2012 at 12:18 PM

      That is precisely what I wanted to portray.. Pain.

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  4. Saru SinghalJanuary 31, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    Sad but what beautiful expression...

    Wish I wrote these lines -
    "With throbbing pain and numbness
    Taking their turns.
    Tear me apart, rip my heart..
    Let me bleed to death.."

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2012 at 5:19 PM

    Reminded me of Rape Me song by Nirvana. I second Saru.

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  6. ElvirahFebruary 2, 2012 at 3:28 PM

    Pain is something which is more difficult to endure than the death. And you have beautifully portrayed how devastating the pain could be and how it could rip your heart with no mercy.


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